Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Introduction of 4th in-class essay.

Usually, children live off their parents' help. They can't make decision without their parents' assistance and they always need their parents' help in order to survive. This is sstill the usuall familiy pattern, but there are many families that are unusual. In such families, children no longer depend on their parents and children's help are indispensable for parents' lives. In other words, the family role is inverted. Some people say that it has some positive effects, yet the parent-child role reversal has negative influence on children because of the following two reasons.
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3 comments:

  1. chiachi ChangApril 28, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    I like your introduction. The thesis statement is very clear. Also you use different word to express the same idea.

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  2. Brenda TibanaApril 28, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    JIPYO, I THINK THAT IN THE SECOND SENTENCE YOU ARE REPITING THE SAME THING AS THE FIRST ONE.AND YOUR IDEAS ARE A LITTLE TOO GENERAL.I BELIEVE THAT FOR YOUR TESIS STAMENT YOU DON'T HAVE TO SAY ,"Some people say that it has some positive effects" BECAUSE YOUR TESIS STAMENT IS ABOUT NEGATIVE INFLUENCE.

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  3. Suhyeon KimApril 28, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    Im unclear about the thesis statement, Its kinda confuse, Other than that Its very structable introduction

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